Edit Video

I am looking for a video editor to edit a series of videos for youtube. This is the first one, there are another 12 to be edited, however I am looking for someone who is creative to make the videos look good. The videos are to teach english.
This was my first attempt ---------- however I have re-shot this video because the sound is not good enough and a few other things that I don't like about it.

I require:
1. Someone who really knows how to cut and edit videos creatively..
2. That can reduce the background hiss from the sound.
3. Is able to edit in a smooth and fun way
4. That can add music when required.
5. That can offer suggestions on how to make the video more interesting for viewers.

I look forward to hearing from you.